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 Wikipedia are helpful, but will imply a lot of rewriting - by an English native...</span></div><div style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 19px; font-family: HelveticaNeue, 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, Arial, 'Lucida Grande', sans-serif; background-color: transparent; font-style: normal;"><span><br></span></div><div style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 19px; font-family: HelveticaNeue, 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, Arial, 'Lucida Grande', sans-serif; background-color: transparent; font-style: normal;"><span>Artur</span></div><div style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 19px; font-family: HelveticaNeue, 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, Arial, 'Lucida Grande', sans-serif; background-color: transparent; font-style: normal;"><span><br></span></div><div style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 19px; font-family: HelveticaNeue, 'Helvetica Neue', Helvetica, Arial, 'Lucida Grande', sans-serif; background-color: transparent; font-style:
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    <div class="yiv7052304107moz-cite-prefix">Hi Artur,<br clear="none">
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      I actually found a reference in a book by Beverly Fletcher,
      "Organization transformation theorists and practitioners: profiles
      and themes" published in 1990 which I was able to cite in
      rewriting to remove the questions in the article page - to give
      the time and conference - Boston Regional ODN in the spring of
      1982. It's an interesting read as this part of the book is visible
      on Google Books preview - <a rel="nofollow" shape="rect" target="_blank" href="http://books.google.com/books?id=U79jGNETRKIC&printsec=frontcover#v=onepage&q&f=false">http://books.google.com/books?id=U79jGNETRKIC&printsec=frontcover#v=onepage&q&f=false</a>.<br clear="none">
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      I looked over the talk section of the Open Space wikipedia entry
      and I think I agree with some of the comments there about the tone
      of the article sounding too much like a promotion or advocacy of
      OST, and the most helpful comment was that the article could use
      benefit from looking at the format of the Wikipedia entry on
      Scrum. This seems like a lot more rewriting is needed to help
      legitimize the article. Too much work for me to do right now - but
      at least I answered those questions.<br clear="none">
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          Harold<br clear="none">
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      On 10/14/13 4:39 AM, Artur Silva wrote:<br clear="none">
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        <div><span>Harold: The idea of correcting the OST entry in the
            Wikipedia is very valuable.</span></div>
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        <div style="color:rgb(0, 0, 0);font-size:16px;background-color:transparent;font-style:normal;"><span>But,
            in what concerns the initial part with issues (</span><span style="font-size:13px;line-height:19.1875px;">In the
            early 1980s</span><sup class="yiv7052304107noprint yiv7052304107Inline-Template" style="line-height:1em;white-space:nowrap;">[<i><a rel="nofollow" shape="rect" target="_blank" href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Manual_of_Style/Dates_and_numbers#Chronological_items" title="Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Dates and numbers" style="text-decoration:none;color:rgb(11, 0, 128);background-image:none;"><span title="The time period mentioned near this tag is                   ambiguous. (September 2013)">when?</span></a></i>]</sup><span style="font-size:13px;line-height:19.1875px;">, Harrison
            Owen wrote a paper on what he called "organization
            transformation". He presented this paper at a traditional
            management conference</span><sup class="yiv7052304107noprint yiv7052304107Inline-Template" style="line-height:1em;white-space:nowrap;">[<i><a rel="nofollow" shape="rect" class="yiv7052304107mw-redirect" target="_blank" href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Avoid_weasel_words" title="Wikipedia:Avoid weasel words" style="text-decoration:none;color:rgb(11, 0, 128);background-image:none;"><span title="The material near this tag possibly uses too                   vague attribution or weasel words. (September 2013)">which?</span></a></i>]</sup><span style="font-size:13px;line-height:19.1875px;">. It was
            well enough received that a number of people</span><sup class="yiv7052304107noprint yiv7052304107Inline-Template" style="line-height:1em;white-space:nowrap;">[<i><a rel="nofollow" shape="rect" class="yiv7052304107mw-redirect" target="_blank" href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Avoid_weasel_words" title="Wikipedia:Avoid weasel words" style="text-decoration:none;color:rgb(11, 0, 128);background-image:none;"><span title="The material near this tag possibly uses                   too-vague attribution or weasel words. (September                   2013)">who?</span></a></i>]</sup><span style="font-size:13px;line-height:19.1875px;"> urged Owen
            to organize a conference to specifically address the issues
            and opportunities he identified in his paper.</span><span style="background-color:transparent;">) as there was not
            such paper, but only a presentation, can't this be explained
            on the "talk page" and propose that the all sentence be
            supressed?</span></div>
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        <div style="background-color:transparent;font-style:italic;"><span style="background-color:transparent;font-size:18px;">Harrison:
            Even if you are not sure if you said that at the time, it is
            still correct and I am sure that you wrote it now :-) </span></div>
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        <div style="background-color:transparent;font-style:italic;color:rgb(0, 0, 0);font-size:18px;"><span style="background-color:transparent;font-size:18px;">So
            can I quote this:</span></div>
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        <div style="background-color:transparent;font-style:italic;"><span style="font-size:18px;"><span style="background-color:transparent;">«</span><span>I don’t know what Organization
              Transformation is, but I suspect that it may be the
              successor to Organization Development, appropriate to life
              in a transforming world.</span><span style="background-color:transparent;">»? </span></span></div>
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        <div style="background-color:transparent;font-style:italic;"><span style="background-color:transparent;font-size:large;">Regards</span></div>
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        <div style="color:rgb(11, 0, 128);font-size:13px;background-color:transparent;font-style:italic;"><span style="background-color:transparent;"><span style="background-color:transparent;font-size:18px;color:rgb(0, 0, 0);">Artur</span>?</span></div>
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              <div dir="ltr"> <font face="Arial" size="2"> On Sunday,
                  October 13, 2013 4:57 PM, Harrison Owen
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                          did make a presentation at a regional
                          gathering of the ODN in the early 80’s.
                          Actually David Belle Isle and I did it
                          jointly. The title of our presentation was
                          “Myth and Ritual as the Ground for
                          Organization Transformation.” There never
                          really was a paper, just some notes, and we
                          just talked. I vaguely recall the last remarks
                          – which I made – “I don’t know what
                          Organization Transformation is, but I suspect
                          that it may be the successor to Organization
                          Development, appropriate to life in a
                          transforming world.” Or something.</span></div>
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                                Shinsato [<a rel="nofollow" shape="rect" class="yiv7052304107moz-txt-link-freetext" ymailto="mailto:harold@shinsato.com" target="_blank" href="mailto:harold@shinsato.com">mailto:harold@shinsato.com</a>] <br clear="none">
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                                <b>To:</b> OSLIST; Harrison Owen<br clear="none">
                                <b>Subject:</b> Original Harrison Owen
                                paper on "Organization Transformation"?</span></div>
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                        <div class="yiv7052304107MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:12.0pt;">Hey folks, an
                          ongoing effort of many people on this list and
                          of the Open Space Institute U.S. has been to
                          fix up the Wikipedia page. <a rel="nofollow" shape="rect" target="_blank" href="http://wikipedia.org/Open_Space_Technology">http://wikipedia.org/Open_Space_Technology</a>.
                          It has had some of the ugly warnings at the
                          beginning removed, but there are still issues.<br clear="none">
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                          The opening of the current version of the
                          wikipedia article cites a paper Harrison Owen
                          wrote at "a traditional management
                          conference".<br clear="none">
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                          What was this paper and is it available
                          anywhere?<br clear="none">
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                          When was it published?<br clear="none">
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                          What was the traditional management conference
                          where it was published?<br clear="none">
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                              Thanks!<br clear="none">
                              Harold</div>
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